Landing Page Teardown
BUT...
Their landing page has SEVEN doors and no clear next step.
You deserve work you love. Teachers are landing remote roles at companies like Pearson... using the skills they already have.
7 menu items
Vague headline
Quiz, Events, or Membership?
One promise in the ad. Seven competing paths on the page.
Seven menu items. Three competing calls to action. A quiz, live events, and a membership plan all fighting for the same click.
A teacher clicks a Facebook ad about "finding work you love." She lands here. Now she has to figure out the difference between Courses, Membership, and 1:1 Coaching before she can take a single step.
That's not a landing page. That's a full website dumped on a stranger.
Matt K: "Within a month, I got a job." Faith H landed Instructional Coach at HMH. Colby R: "I JUST GOT HIRED!!"
Real people. Real names. Real companies. Real timelines.
This is the most powerful content on the entire page. It's buried so deep that nobody clicking a Facebook ad will ever scroll far enough to see it.
THE FIX
"Within a month, I got a job."
— Matt K.
This line should be the first thing
a stranger sees. Not the last.
100% gained the skills and confidence. 100% improved their resumes. 100% feel more likely to get hired.
100% of how many people? Five? Five thousand?
"Feel more likely to get hired" is not the same as "got hired." No real program has 100% anything. When every number is 100%, none of them mean anything.
"Are you where I was as a teacher?" appears on this page. It's trying to build a personal connection.
But who is "I"? No name. No photo. No "I taught 4th grade in Ohio for 12 years." Just a disembodied voice with a checklist.
The same checklist appears twice on the page. Identical text, copy-pasted. That tells the visitor nobody is closely managing this page.
THE FIX
Name the founder.
Show their face.
Tell their story.
"I taught 4th grade for 12 years
before I built Teacher Transition"
beats "Are you where I was?" every time.
The things that cost you the most are invisible from the surface. They sit in your headline, your proof placement, your page structure. Finding them requires someone to sit with your page and follow every path a visitor can take.
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