Markman
Capital

Financial publishing company. A team running Meta ads to a custom landing page. Leads in the CRM. Everything working. They brought me on to write copy.

Before I wrote a single word, I ran a diagnostic on the funnel.

I wasn't hired to audit infrastructure. I was hired to write. But I don't write until I understand the system the writing lives in. So I opened the page source, walked every form submission path, read every nurture email, and sat with the data long enough to see what it actually said.

Five invisible leaks.

All of them bleeding money. None of them visible from any dashboard.

The pixel was wrong.

The ads had been running for 18 days before I arrived. The Meta pixel ID in the page source was 1915441872701793. The dataset the ad campaign was actually using was 28241351558788720. Every browser event was feeding a dataset that had nothing to do with the ads.

$1,125 in ad spend, optimizing against nothing.

Nobody on the team had caught it.

The form was broken.

Leads entered their information. The form looked like it worked. Contacts appeared in HubSpot. But a setting called "limit tracking to these domains" blocked every submission from triggering the nurture sequence.

People signed up and heard nothing. The company paid to acquire leads, then ghosted them through a system failure invisible from the dashboard.

The downsell was dead.

The email-only signup for people not ready to commit returned a 400 error on every attempt. A required field that didn't exist on the form. Red error message. Dead end. Every person who considered the softer option hit a wall and left.

The data was lying.

The nurture showed 12% opens on its first email. The team thought they had a deliverability crisis.

12% 28% 121 stale contacts retroactively enrolled. Remove that artifact and the real number emerges.

The team was solving the wrong problem because nobody had sat with the numbers long enough to understand what they actually said.

The nurture was echoing the landing page.

Five emails. Every one restating the same arguments the page already made. Same claims, same proof, aimed at people who had already read the page and decided against it. The sequence wasn't advancing anything. It was repeating.

Five failures across pixel configuration, form settings, workflow logic, data interpretation, and email strategy. The page looked fine. The ads were running. The dashboard showed activity.

Better copy or higher ad spend would have fixed none of it.

The sequence was arguing hard

instead of saying something new.

The diagnosis kept uncovering what was hidden, so the scope kept growing.

I wasn't working through a deliverables list. I was following connections the diagnostic kept exposing.

Landing page rewritesurfaced the nurture problem
Nurture rebuildclarified the VSL angle
VSLshaped the ad creative
Ad performancerevealed the infrastructure bugs
Landing page
8 iterations. Systematic review panels: CRO, copy quality, external ad executive. Each round caught what the last one missed.
Nurture sequence
Rebuilt from scratch. 5 emails became 7 over 15 days. Each with a single job. No email repeats what another already said.
3 VSL scripts
Different angles. Client filmed the winner at 4:41. An industry veteran called it "totally different than industry normal."
6 Meta ad creatives
Five killed after testing. One still running at $8.74 cost per lead on cold traffic.
Outbound program
Texts, call scripts, objection handling, branching paths, "what not to say" list. Four review passes before delivery.
Everything else
Welcome sequences. Investor funnel overview. CS SOP review. Social media AI that took LinkedIn from zero to thousands per week.

Everything connected because everything was diagnosed together.

33.76%
"That's a CRAZY conversion rate for a cold audience, man!"

Joe Markman, Founder, Markman Capital

975 out of 2,888 cold visitors converted. In financial services, where 2–5% is considered normal.

I was promoted to Senior Marketing Director with independent platform access. Joe told me: "Feel free to push back or ask more questions. We care about the goal of writing the best sales letter possible."

The entire marketing funnel exists where nothing systematic existed before. Every stage built, tested, and connected by one person who started by finding a wrong pixel ID in the page source.

Your page probably doesn't have a wrong Meta pixel.

But it has something. A form that looks like it works but doesn't trigger what it should. A nurture sequence that repeats the page instead of advancing the argument. Data that looks bad but isn't, or data that looks fine while a real problem sits underneath it.

The things that cost you the most are invisible from the surface. They sit in settings panels and field configurations and workflow logic, buried where dashboards and checklists will never find them. Surfacing them requires someone to sit with your page and follow every path a visitor can take.

That's what the PageLifts audit is.

Book a Paid Audit $500

I take one client at a time. I sit with your page, find what's actually broken, and give you a diagnosis you can act on.

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