Landing Page Teardown

She has 1.7 million followers.

BUT...

There's ZERO proof on her landing page.

Her Instagram
Shelby Sapp Instagram profile with 1.7M followers, verified badge, student wins highlights, reels with millions of views 1.7M followers Verified badge Student wins highlights 4.5M+ views per reel
Her landing page
Shelby Sapp masterclass landing page with no testimonials, no student results, no follower count mentioned No social proof Vague headline No testimonials No credentials

23+ Meta ads sending strangers to
a page with zero social proof.

I found four problems with this page.

  1. 1The headline promises nothing specific
  2. 2Zero social proof anywhere on the page
  3. 3Every section talks about her instead of the visitor
  4. 4The about section is autobiography, not proof

1. The headline promises nothing specific

"How To Step Into High Ticket Sales With Shelby Sapp." Step into what? What's the outcome? What's the number? What's the timeline? A stranger doesn't know what "high ticket sales" even means.

This page could belong to any of the 100s of coaches selling the same thing.

Before
FREE LIVE MASTERCLASS!
How To Step Into High Ticket Sales With Shelby Sapp
Breaking down the industry that allows the ladies and I to work from anywhere.
July 28th // 8pm EST (5pm PST)
SAVE MY FREE SPOT
After
FREE LIVE MASTERCLASS
How Women With Zero Sales Experience Are Earning $8-15K/Month In Remote Sales
The exact 5 steps our students use to land sales roles, even with ZERO experience.
Joined by 8,000+ women.
Rated 4.9/5 by 1,090 students.
SAVE MY FREE SPOT

2. Zero social proof on the entire page

This is the biggest problem. Shelby has 1.7 million followers, student wins highlights on Instagram, a verified badge, and reels with millions of views. The landing page contains none of it.

Her followers already trust her. They've watched months of content. A stranger from a Facebook ad hasn't seen any of it. They land on a page that says "trust me" without giving a single reason to.

THE FIX

"8,000+ women trained.
Rated 4.9/5."

The proof already exists on
her Instagram. She just needs to
add it to her page.

3. Every section talks about her instead of the visitor

The sub-headline talks about HER lifestyle. The bullets describe HER framework.

Every section is written from Shelby's perspective instead of the visitor's.

A stranger doesn't care where Shelby works from.

They care about where THEY could work from and how much THEY could earn.

Before
You're going to learn all this...
Exactly what this hidden sales role is, and why it's perfect for women who crave control over their life
My framework that makes sales easy, and how you can close deals even if you're new to sales
Why NOW is the best time to find and secure best opportunities in the sales industry on your terms
After
In 60 minutes, you'll walk away with:
The exact script our top students use on their first sales call (copy-paste ready)
How Maria went from barista to $12K/month in 90 days with zero sales experience
The 3 companies hiring remote closers right now and what they pay per deal

4. The about section is autobiography, not proof

"I started She Sells because I asked myself: what did my younger self really need?"

This is wrong because the visitor doesn't care about young Shelby. They only care about...

How many people has she helped? What results did they get? Why should they trust Shelby over other sales coaches?

A conversion page needs credentials, proof, and numbers. But her page has NONE of that.

Before
Hi, I'm Shelby Sapp
YOUR HOST & FOUNDER OF SHE SELLS REMOTE
I started She Sells because I asked myself: what did my younger self really need?
Little Shelby needed three things: measurable training with one-on-one coaching, connections to top remote sales companies, and a supportive community.
And just like that, She Sells Remote was born...
After
Your host: Shelby Sapp
8,000+
women trained
1.7M
followers
#1
female sales trainer
"I quit my 9-5 with no backup plan and built a $2M sales company in 3 years. Now I teach other women to do the same."
This page was built for people who already follow her.
The assumption
The reality
The Facebook ads send people who don't.

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